Love the way you've written this with the 'Don't Go' aspect.

Thanks Sue, I'm glad you like my writing. It's always nice to get compliments from other writers and awards from editors as well as it spurs you on to continue.

Thanks Irenke, that means a lot as I'm a big fan of your writing
Cheers!
Sue H

I agree with you, I found that part of the title quiet catchy & clever :) nice work.